This is a poem about the ugly creatures that linger around in our backyard. This is number 10 on my list. You will have to figure out what kind of creatures hang around in our backyard.

Creatures

Cocking their necks.

Running around like a chicken with their head cut off.

Eating every time I look.

After each other for everything

Trees are what they call home

Ugly

Roosting

Everywhere

Sounds they make: the weirdest ones ever

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8 responses »

  1. Hadley says:

    But some creatures, such as the ones in our class aren’t eating everyplace. Other than that, your poem looks like it’s describing our creatures perfectly!

    • Hannah C says:

      What creatures am I talking about though?! You’re probably the only one out of the sixth grade who could answer that question because of experience. šŸ™‚

  2. makaylak22 says:

    The poem creatures sounds a lot like the boys in our class.

  3. Shaylee says:

    I like this poem because it describes the boys inside and out. šŸ™‚

  4. Natalie E says:

    Hey Hannah, Nat here. I just read Creatures and it was amazing!!!!! When you grow up you should be a writer. You are great at it šŸ™‚ See you soon!!!!!!!

  5. Dad says:

    Can you give more hints about what type of animal the backyard creatures are?

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